2009年中考英语作文写作技巧及范文必读
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增大字体Ⅰ.中考英语写作的常见题型及写作步骤：
一、常见题型：1、根据所给标题写作，2、根据英语情景提示写作，3、根据英汉提示写作，4、看图写作。
二、写作步骤：应尽可能地留出20分钟的时间来写作文。在正式写作文时，可参照以
下步骤：
1、认真审题，确定题目中的关键词。
2、展开一次“Brain Storm”即头脑风暴，对该题引申出各种联想和论点。
3、根据自己已有的经验和词汇量选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的方面和论点来写作。
4、确定基本的写作时态，如记叙文通常用一般过去时。（时态运用错误是考生们大量失分的主要原因。）
5、对于有能力的同学，注意不能通篇均用简单句型，可适当引入初中的语法重点如状语从句、宾语从句和被动语态等。这会使考生的作文有质的提高。
6、当整篇作文写完，一定要进行仔细的检查，注意使句子流畅，时态运用准确，单词拼写正确，冠词运用正确，名词的大小写正确。
Ⅱ. 范文必读:
1. To be a lovely Shanghainese
审题：该题的重点在于阐述作为一个可爱的上海人，我们关键应怎样做？在2006年的考生作文中，有一部分同学发生了严重的偏题，把描述重点放在形容上海是怎样的一个大都市，因此失分很多。由此看来，审题的准确是非常重要的。
学生作文：Shanghai is developing quickly everyday. Quite a few foreigners come to visit
2． Four years' school life
审题：该题要求考生对四年的初中生活进行回顾和总结，适合以夹叙夹议的方式来写作。（此外，从情感教育的角度来看，阅卷老师总希望读到考生回忆自己美好、快乐的初中生活，而不是讨厌自己的母校、老师、同学等消极情绪的体现。）
学生作文：I've been in my middle school for four years. Four years' school life plays an important role in my life. I enjoy making friends, getting knowledge and having interesting time in my school. I have also made friendship with lots of classmates, and I have also been taught different lessons by lots of different patient teachers. I have grown up a lot in the past four years. I will never forget my four years' school life.
3、写一封信给你在云南省西双版纳市的笔友李帆，告诉他你很愿意与他交朋友，并邀请他到上海来旅行。
审题：该题要求考生以规范的信件格式来书写，并把题中所出现的信息点都涵盖在内。建议考生可把题目中的信息点都一一划出，以免发生遗漏。
Lifan
Xishuangbanna
May 25th, 2006
Dear Lifan,
Thank you for your letter. I'm glad to be your pen-friend. We are the same years old, but we were born in different places. In my imagination, Xishuangbanna is a very beautiful place. There are a lot of plants and animals. You know I look forward to visiting Xishuangbanna. Would you like to come to
If you come here, I will show you around
Yours sincerely,
Xiaomin
4、写一篇题为“A Visit To_____”的日记。
审题：该题为半命题式作文。考生除了要注意运用正确的日记格式，还可根据自己的经验和熟悉程度来选择、确定文章的主题.
May 25th, 2004 sunny
A Visit To
The traffic there is very convenient. You can got here by tunnel and No.2 subway. And if you live near it, you can walk there just like our family. We went to the eighty-eighth floor of
5、看图写话
看图写话是初中英语作文常考的一种形式，但随着牛津版教材的大量应用，学生的写作能力有了较大的提高，因此中考作文的要求和难度也相应提高。所以，在中考作文中继续出现简单的叙事型看图写话的可能性很小，但有可能会提供给考生一些具有寓意的漫画或图片，要求考生从中发现问题、提出自己的观点，这对考生的逻辑思维能力和英语语言的娴熟运用都提出了更高的要求。
㈠、 审题：这幅漫画蕴涵了一个深刻的主题即战争与和平，这与当今世界的热点问题密切相关，它不仅考核考生是否能流畅地表达自己的观点，更需要考生站在人文关怀的高度来观察整个世界。
A Represent of Freedom and Peace
Almost everyday we can see there are always a large number of pigeons enjoying the sunbath in some large squares, but do you often care what a white pigeon stands for? That is peace. For hundreds of years, people always regard pigeons as a represent of freedom and peace. That is because of not only its lovely pure figure, but also its great passion to the outside world. Till now, I still can't help thinking of such a picture: In Iraq, a boy was watching a white pigeon over his head. The background was full of wounded solders and guns. Thus, this lovely white pigeon was contrastive to this iced background and gave people a deep consideration. Suddenly, a thought comes into my mind: Why there have been so many wars in the world just for someone's own interest? Why can't people live like as mall pigeon with freedom? I hope there will not be wars, FOREVER!
㈡、 审题：该图要求考生先看懂漫画，对它进行清晰的描述，同时根据其隐藏的寓意提出自己的观点，如在此图中应关注树木被砍伐而提出环保的重要性。
学生作文：
Seeing this picture, we know that these trees have been cut down. But as a very little baby in the picture, he must be puzzled. He will ask: What are these? Are these trees? Of course, in our imagination, trees must be tall, strong and green enough. Actually, his question shows humans a problem that is worth thinking about. The covering rate of the forest in the world has kept decreasing these years and it caused a lot of problems on environment. As we all know, trees are very important in our life. They can make the air fresher, reduce natural disasters and soon. So I appeal: Don't cut down trees. Let's make our earth greener for our later generation. Don't let the children think trees are only roots!
6、杨丽娟追星事件
近日，各种媒体广泛关注兰州女子杨丽娟追星事件。杨16岁时见到刘德华的照片，心生爱慕，于是便辍学在家“专职”追星，十几年来无所事事，其间其家人也倾力相助。
中学生追星族也不乏其人。请根据上述提示，并结合杨丽娟事件与生活实际，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的认识和感悟。
注意：1 生词：偶像idol 2 词数：120词左右
Yang Lijuan has done nothing but admire and follow her idol for more ten years .Even her family helps her to achieve her “goal” at all cost . Obviously , she has gone too far as a crazy fan.
Actually ,many middle school students have their idols. As far as I’m concerned ,having an idol itself isn’t a bad thing ,but the point is :we should act in a proper way .On one hand ,we should first of all focus our attention on our own work .It’s very important for us to have our own career, and we are asked to take responsibilities for our family and society .On the other hand ,remember :no pains ,no games .Our idols have gained their fame through hard work as well .Being diligent ,they have set a good example to us .Instead of worshipping them blindly, we should learn from them.
7、2008年奥运会我要做一名志愿者
I want to be a volunteer of
8、电脑游戏 Computer games
Computer games are a hot topic nowadays. Some people hold that it is bad. And others hold that it is good. In my view, whether good or bad is determined by the players.
If one plays computer game properly in his spare time, computer games can be an excellent source of joy. For example, something impossible in your real life can be realized in the computer games. You can pilot a space craft and travel in the universe. Every coin has two sides. If one plays computer game excessively, it may affects h is eyesight and study.
The computer games itself is only a tool like knife. If we use it properly, it can pare apples. But if we use it to attack others, it immediately becomes an lethal weapon.
9、网上交友(Making Friends on Line)
These days many students like to make friends on line. Most of them think it's interesting to know a stranger through the Internet. As a matter of fact, only a few of them have succeeded in getting a real good friend in this way. Most of them have been cheated. Some of them have committed crimes with the friends on line. So we should be careful of making friends on line. We'd better pay more attention to our study.
10、我爱父母 I love parents
Who gives me birth? Who brings me up? Who dedicates his /her whole life to me? My parents.
Who gives me food? Who gives me clothes? Who gives me care? My parents.
My parents, they don’t want to get any reward from me. Not only my parents, all the parents in the world don’t charge anything from their children. They give us everything they can. They spend their whole life loving me, so I love my parents, too. Since I was given birth, I’ve started to love them even if I didn’t realize it.
It will be the time for my birthday soon. I want to say to my parents: I love you.
11、My Pet
1.我的宠物是一条可爱的狗。它的名字是'点点' ,因为有很多黑的圆圈在它的皮肤上。'点点' 是非常友好的。许多孩子喜欢和它玩。他的喜爱食物是肉骨头。 他的喜爱玩具是玩偶。' 点点' 喜欢非常跑。它跑得非常快速并且它有一个女朋友。它的名字'娜娜' 。它的皮肤也有很多黑圈子。我非常喜欢我的宠物。这是一只好宠物!!
My pet is a lovely dog. Its name is Dian Dian because there are a lot of black circle on its skin. Dian Dian is very friendly. Many children like play with him. His favourite food is meat bones.
His favourite toy is a doll. Dian Dian likes to run very much. It can run very fast and it has a girl friend. Its name Na Na. There are a lot of black circle on its skin,too. I like my pet very much.It is a good pet!!
2.我有两只小猫。他们非常漂亮。一只是黄色的。另一只是白色的。他们非常可爱。黄色的小猫很调皮。他经常到处跑。他最喜欢的游戏是玩球、绳子和石头。而白色的小猫非常温和。她喜欢洗她的脸。并且她不喜欢和人玩。她经常跳上我的膝盖。我喜欢给她洗澡。
噢，我的小猫为我带来了很多愉快。我们是非常好的朋友。我爱他们。
I have got two baby cats. they are very beautiful. One is yellow, the other is white. They are very lovely. The yellow cat is very naughty. He likes to play with people. He of ten runs here and there. H is favourite game is playing with balls, ropes and stones. But the white cat is very gentle. She likes to wash her face. And she doesn′t like to play with people. She of ten jumps onto my knees. I like to give her a bath.
Oh, my baby cats bring me much happiness. We are very good friends. I love them.
12、围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题
假设你是李小龙，是“某某一中”的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会’’的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。
要点提示：1．人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心
2．人与人：家人、师长、同学，诚信互助
3．人与自然：能源、环境、动植物，爱惜保护
4．你的态度：(内容由考生自己拟定)
Dear fellow students,
Our government is aiming to build a 'harmonious society'. I think it is every citizen＇s duty to work hard to achieve th is goal.
As middle school students, what should we do?
First of all, we should love our motherland. Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school and activities.
Secondly, let’s fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. More importantly, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life.
Finally, let’s work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.
As for myself, I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above.
Dear fellow students, let＇s start fight now and spare no effort/efforts to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!
Li Xiaolong
13、穿校服的利与弊(Advantages and Disadvantages of Wearing school uniforms)
Wearing school uniforms has both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, it make students feel proud of their schools. In addition, it builds a common spirit of unity among students. Furthermore, it reminds students of the value and history of their school. However, some students dislike them because of their simple colors, boring designs and bad quality. So i think that people should improve the quality of the school uniforms.
14、保护环境
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. For example, cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. Furthermore, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence.
The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to cope with these problems by the government. Laws have been passed to stop pollution. I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better.
全世界的环境问题变得越来越严重。例如汽车污染的空气影响了人们的呼吸，工厂释放污染的气体，山上的树木被砍伐，污水不断被排人河里。另外，无论我们走到哪里，到处可见随意丢弃的垃圾。事实上，污染正威胁我们的生存。
地球是我们的家园，我们有责任为我们自己和我们的后代去照顾好它。庆幸的是，愈来愈多的人们已经意识到这些问题。政府已经采取了很多措施去解决这些问题，法律已被通过以制止污染。我希望这些问题在不远的将来能得到解决，我们的家园变得越来越好。
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas. Trees on the hills have been cut down, and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. Further more, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing. Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man's existence.
We must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems. For instance, new laws must be passed to place strict control over industrial pollution; the public must receive the education about the hazard of pollution and so on. We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.
全世界的环境问题在变得越来越严重。随着工农业的发展，汽车制造噪音、排放毒气，山上的树木被砍伐，污水不断被排入河里。另外，无论我们走到哪里，到处可见随意丢弃的垃圾。整个地球生态平衡正在改变，环境的巨大破坏已带来负面影响，甚至对人类生存带来巨大威胁。
我们必须面对现实，采取行动解决环境问题。例如必须通过新的法律严格控制工业污染问题，大众必须接受污染危害的教育等。我们希望这些措施的有效实施能带给我们一个健康的环境。
15、给编辑写信表示赞成或反对中学生使用手机
随着社会的发展，越来越多的中学生也开始使用手机。同时，也带来了不少负面影响。为此，台州某中学规定严禁带手机进校园。请你根据下面表格中的内容给《二十一世纪报》社写一封信，明确表示赞成或反对中学生使用手机（只能选择一种观点）。
赞成意见 反对意见
1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。
1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。
2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。
2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。
3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。
3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。
4.只要正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。
注意：
1.可适当增加细节和连接词，使文章通顺连贯；开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
2.词数：100左右；
Dear Editor,
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.
As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it. Suppose there’s a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately. There’re also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studies. In my opinion, it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.
Yours truly,
◇◇◇
Advantages and Disadvantages of mobile Phones(手机的利弊)
1．手机使用的普遍性；
2．手机的优点；
3．手机的危害及我的建议。
[写作导航]先指出当前手机使用很普遍，然后用事实(随处可见人们用手机通话，许多大学生、高中生都有手机)来支持主题句；手机的优点主要是方便通信，甚至上网，还体现在突发事件(疾病、交通事故)的求助上；手机的缺点主要是辐射和干扰他人，因此我建议尽量少用，重要场合(开会、上课时)关机。
[范文]
Mobile phones have become increasingly popular in
Mobile phones have brought people a lot of benefits, but the most important is that they are convenient. With mobile phones in their hands, they can keep in touch with anybody they want. If they want to get some information from the Internet, they can easily have their dream realized via mobile phones too. Furthermore, if someone has a heart attack or a traffic accident, a call to emergency hospital or to the police can quickly bring him the help he wants.
However, mobile phones can also bring people problems. The most serious is the electric wave radiation which is thought to be harmful to users' brains. Another problem is that when people are having a meeting or having a class or at a concert etc, the ring of the mobile phone may interrupt others. So I think people should use mobile phones as little as possible and turn them off when they are attending important meetings or attending class
16、关于香港回归10周年的作文
假若今天是香港回归 10 周年纪念日，你观看了中央电视台的专题节目，看到了香港回归所发生的巨大变化。
根据下列要求写一篇英语日记，表达自己盼望祖国统一的心愿。
1. 香港、澳门和台湾自古以来就是中国的领土，由于历史的原因被分割。
2. 1997 年 7 月 1 日香港已经回归祖国， 1999 年 12 月 20 日澳门也回到了祖国的怀抱。香港和澳门的明天会更加美好。
3. 台湾是中国领土不可分割（ integral ）的一部分，中国人民，包括生活在台湾的绝大多数人都盼望台湾赶快回归祖国。
注：英语短文的标题已经给出，全文约 100 词。
How I Wish China Would Be United Sooner！
July 1st， 2007 Fine
Hong Kong and Macao are parts of China in history， but they were separated from the motherland for some political reasons.
16、我爱我的家 I love my family
根据中文意思和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。所给的英文提示词语必须都用上；中文提示内容不必逐句翻译；根据英文提示,每组所写出的句数不限。
几年以前我家只有一间小屋。三个人住一间屋真是艰难。现在我们已经搬进了一套两室一厅 的单元房。我非常高兴。当我父母做. . . , 我能. . . 。我爱我的家。
1. a few years ago, family, have one small room
2. it, be, three people, in the same room
3. now, a new flat(单元房), one living room, two bedrooms
4. be happy, my homework, quietly, my own room, my parents
我爱我的家(I love my family)
A few years ago, my family had only one small room. It was very hard for three people to live in the same room. Now we have moved into a new flat with one living room and two bedrooms. I＇m very happy. I can do my homework quietly in my own room when my parents do the housework or other things. I love my home.
17、看 电 视
TV is very important in our life. We can get to know all kinds of events around the world. We can know the weather, information, laws, knowledge and so on. After busy work, we can watch some funny programs to relax.
TV benefits us, but sometimes it has bad influence. Some students watch TV day and night. It influences their lessons. Some programs are not good for children.
So we should choose proper programs at proper time for people in different ages.
电视在我们生活中非常重要，我们可以了解世界各地的事件。我们能了解天气、信息、法律、文化知识等等。忙碌的工作后我们可以看一些娱乐节目放松自己。
电视为我们带来了好处，但它也有坏影响。一些学生日夜看电视，这影响了他们的功课。一些节目不适合孩子们看。
所以我们应该按照不同的年龄，在合适的时间选取合适的节目看。
Now TV has become necessary in our life. We can get all kinds of information through TV. The world is in front of us. The distance between countries is shortened with the help of TV. Every day we can watch some interesting programs to make us happy.
Although TV has some benefits, sometimes it has bad influence. Some students have no time to study because they watch TV in all the free time. And some programs are not proper for children.
So we should choose some good programs to watch, especially for children.
现在电视已经是我们生活中的必需品。我们可以通过电视获取各种信息。世界呈现在我们面前，国与国之间的距离因为电视变近了。每天我们看一些有趣的节目，这使我们很愉快。
虽然电视有一些好处，有时它也有坏影响。一些学生没有时间学习，因为他们把所有空闲时间都用于看电视。还有一些节目不适合孩子们。
所以我们应该选取一些好节目来看，特别是对孩子们。
18、以'My Chinese Teacher'为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下:
1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。
2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。
3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。
My Chinese Teacher
Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.
My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.Ms Sun works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.
Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And we're getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.
Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.
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