高考英语图表作文写作训练一 高考作文
图表作文近年高考和各地的模拟考试中,也屡次出现,而且学生普遍反映此类文章不好写,难于下手动笔。但是如果我们仔细研究就不难会发现,其实此类文章还是有一些共同点和规律可以操作的,值得我们总结。
例文(一)
假如你是李华,在最近的研究性学习当中,受《21世纪中学生英语报》 (The 21st Century)之邀,你对你所在的班60名同学(男女各半)进行了上网目的的调查。现将调查结果(如下表所示)用英语给报社的编辑写一封信,报道此事,以引起舆论的关注,并提出你的观点和建议。
注意:
1、报道应包括图表所示全部内容,可适度发挥。
2、文章的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3、词数:150
4、参考词汇:调查: make a survey
Dear editor,
I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in my class about their purpose of getting on the Internet.
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思路点拨
题材:书信;说明+议论
时态:一般现在时
人称:第三人称
要点提示:(1)上网的目的;(2)读新闻;(3)发送邮件;(4)聊天;(5)学习;(6)玩游戏;(7)评语
范文:
Dear editor,
I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in my class about their purpose of getting on the Internet.
The girls’ favorite is chatting, but few boys like it. What the boys like to do most is playing games and the girls also like it. Both boys and girls like to read news or send e-mails on the Internet. Maybe they think it’s the most convenient way to get information from keeping in touch with friends. As for studying, the numbers of boys and girls are equal, but altogether only several of them will use the Internet as a tool to study.
In my opinion, useful as the Internet is, the students had better make better and wise use of it. Otherwise, it’s impossible for us to benefit from it. Moreover, I also hope the parents will pay enough attention to their children using the Internet in their spare time.
Yours,
Li Hua
文采修饰
连接词的选用:but, both…, and, moreover, otherwise
高级词汇的选用:keep in touch with, as for…, use… as …, benefit from, pay attention to, altogether, in one’s opinion.
复杂句型的选用:what…most 引导的主语从句;as 引导的让步状语从句;倒装语序