高考英语图表作文写作训练三 高考作文

假如你叫李华，参加学校开展的“有困难向谁求助”（Whom do you turn to when in trouble?）的调查活动，调查结果如下表。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信反映相关内容。
 

注意：
1．内容要点全面，并表达出你的观点。为了使文章连贯，可适当增加内容。
2．词数：120词左右。
One possible version:

Dear editor,
    I’m a student in Senior Three. We have made a survey－“Who do you turn to when in trouble?” Here are the results.
 Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble as they’re almost of the same age, so they have a lot in common and understand each other easily. Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask them for help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted by these students.
Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves. They hate to talk with others and can’t get on well with others. They have few friends.
    In my opinion, when in trouble we’d better ask our teachers, parent, friends or classmates for help.
                                                     Sincerely yours.
                                                     Li Hua
点评：

文章开篇点题：we have made a survey ,here are the results，文中用when in trouble,have a lot in common, ask sb for help, in my opinion 以及倒装句结构增加了文章的感染和表现力。