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北京等大城市由禁放鞭炮改为限放。中央电视台《东方时空》栏目2月9日播出“时空调查：过年你放鞭炮了吗？” 并且联合新浪网做了一个调查，结果是：1、 放了的占 80.16% 2、没放的占 19.84% ，中国人都喜欢用燃放烟花爆竹迎接中国年，可是不可否认的是，对于“禁放烟花爆竹”的争议却从来没有断过。请你根据以下调查结果阐明燃放鞭炮的利弊。

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    As we know Beijing banned setting off fireworks in 1994. After 12 silent Spring Festivals, Beijing regained a gorgeous festival eve which was decorated with splendid fireworks and livened up with firecracker clacks. However, there is still a heated discussion whether we should ban fireworks or not in the city.______________________________________________________________________________
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    As we know Beijing banned setting off fireworks in 1994. After 12 silent Spring Festivals, Beijing regained a gorgeous festival eve which was decorated with splendid fireworks and livened up with firecracker clacks. However, there is still a heated discussion whether we should ban fireworks or not in the city.
    According to the recent survey, there are 80.16% of people who support our Chinese traditional way to celebrate China New Year. They think setting off fireworks can certainly add pleasure and joy to the festival and it can bring more traditional colors in the modern era. However, 19.84 % of people think that setting off fireworks can cause air and noise pollution. What’s worse, it sometimes causes terrible accidents to us and to our poverty. And it is very common that every year many people got injured by setting off the fireworks carelessly.

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