立足英语教材，挖掘写作素材——浅谈高中英语教学中的写作训练

当然，还可从其他角度引导学生续写本剧，如：Choose one situation to re-write a scene the other way round.

1. If Mathilde had not borrowed the necklace from Jeanne, ...

2. If Mathilde had not lost her necklace at the ball, ...

3. If Jeanne had told Mathilde that the necklace was made of glass, ...

4. If Mathilde had just agreed to wear a flower at the ball, ...

5. If Mathilde's husband had been wealthy, ...

续写是学生综合能力的体现，能加深学生对课文的理解，使学生尝到创作的乐趣。

五、评写——用理性的思维演绎课文

评写是就所学课文或阅读材料进行评述。通过分析原文中的内容和观点，提出自己的看法。评论可以是全面的，也可以着眼于一点；可以是赞同原文的观点，也可以提出异议。

高中英语教材中有很多与现实生活贴近的话题，可让学生就这些话题阐述自己的看法。例如，在学习了Animal Experiments (SEFC 1B Unit 16)之后，让学生以Should animal testing be OK? 为题作文，有学生写道：I think animal testing is a good idea and it is OK. So scientists should continue testing on animals which are not rare animals. It can help human beings to fight against diseases. 在学习了Great Women (SEFC 1B Unit 17)这一单元后，让学生以My View on Women为题作文。同学们各抒己见，写出了不少有见地的文章来。

此外，对于教材中的文学作品，可让学生写读后感或人物形象分析等。例如，在读了A Christmas Carol (SEFC 3 Unit 7)之后，一个学生写道：I think it is a really moving story. I learnt that happiness and friendship are more important than money in the world. I will be a kind and warm-hearted man.

又如，在读了A Tale of Two Cities (SEFC 3 Unit 7)之后，引导学生写读后感：Which of the characters do you like most? Why?

S1. In my opinion, Sydney Carton is the real hero of the story. His love for Lucie knows no bounds. What he did for Lucie was unforgettable, tearful and bittersweet. For love, he sacrificed everything, even life! This makes him one of the strongest characters in the story, especially because his act is so unselfish.

S2. Who I like most in the story is Dr. Manette. He is honest and kind but suffers the persecution actually. When Charles was put into prison, he visited Charles but became mad again after returning. The prison was the nightmare for him, but for his daughter, he suffered from it again.

在读了The Merchant of Venice(SEFC 2B Unit 19)之后，要求学生分析剧中主要人物形象。许多学生发表了各自独到的见解，如：Shylock is cruel, greedy, selfish, cold-blooded, but he suffers the loss of his daughter, his property, and, very importantly for him, his religion. So, we should have mercy on him.

评写这种“一半依材，一半发挥

上一页  [1] [2] [3] [4] [5]  下一页