写出你的情，表达你的意———让书面表达文采飞扬 高中获奖英语论文

2）转折

在高考作文中我们经常要使用到相反的观点，所以呢，在我们写作文的时候，学生可以在写要点之前先来点废话，但要注意二者之间的关系，要用个转折。如：

He looks young , but he knows a lot of things.

The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers. However, it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings.(2009陕西卷)

A  convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way.(2009江苏卷)

更多的短语：despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3）因果

写作文时我们总需要个先什么，后什么，因为什么所以什么的。“所以、然后”这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！如：

The snow began to fall, so we went home.

It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.(2008福建卷)

Students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.(2008江苏卷)

更多短语：

then , consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

当然书面表达能力的提高不是一朝一夕之事，所以在平时的写作中，要在遣词造句上多下功夫，尽可能运用较熟悉的词组、短语或成语；并且要力求变换各种句式，运用多用句型结构。当然，也不能片面追求花俏文字，拼凑错误百出的句子，这样也会使作文大打折扣。所以只有进行有的放矢的训练，学会变通和概括，在平时注意语言素材的积累。才能在高考中写出有质量、有文采的文章。

参考资料： 2009《浙江省英语考试大纲》

           2008《普通高中英语课程标准》

           2009 《浙江省高考命题解析》

           各省各年高考卷

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